Carolyn Stults
Mrs Wood
11A 2nd Block
16 February 2016
Macbeth Characterization Essay
Macbeth began as a very lively person who many loved, including the king, it was not until he had an unfortunate run-in with the weird sisters. After Banquo and he were stopped by the witches his life would never be the same. They told him he would be Thane of Cawdor, which he already was and was just unaware of it. The one thing they said that stuck with him is that he would soon be King, and the lasting effects of that one prophecy would prove to be fatal to many. Although Macbeth was a complex character - at once loyal, conflicted, and remorseful - these characteristics disappeared through guilt and left him hollow and empty.
One of the major reasons Macbeth was opposed to killing the king was simply because he was a highly loyal warrior of the king's army. “The service and loyalty I owe,/In doing it,pays itself.” He would not even dare to be thinking about the idea of ever harming King Duncan. That is until the three witches come and change everything, once Macbeth knows about him being king, his loyalty begins to falter. He had told his wife of the witches prophecy and she becomes obsessed with the idea of getting to the throne by themselves, and as quickly as possible. They are informed of the King coming to dinner at their castle the next night and begin to plan his end. As soon as Macbeth sees the king and greets him into his home, he is filled with the feeling of loyalty all over again, and decides against killing the king.
“We will proceed no further in this business:
He hath honored me of late, and I have bought
Golden opinions from all sorts of people,
Which would be worn now in their newest gloss,
Not cast aside so soon”
Still Lady Macbeth has a different idea, and claims if Macbeth is not willing to kill him, then she will have to do it. When it comes time to pull it off, she can not follow through and somehow manages to shift Macbeth’s loyalty back to her and convinces him to kill the king.
Throughout the entire tragedy, Macbeth is confronted with many challenges and is conflicted on how to solve them. When he first hears about his chance to be king, he knows how he can obtain the throne but is not sure if he can do it.
“Are less than horrible imaginings.
My thoughts whose murder yet is but fantastical,
shakes my single state of man that function
Is smothered in surmise, and nothing is
but what is not.”
My thoughts whose murder yet is but fantastical,
shakes my single state of man that function
Is smothered in surmise, and nothing is
but what is not.”
He is not sure if he needs to force his becoming king or to just leave it alone and let it happen as fate has meant it to happen. It is not until the following scene that Macbeth has another realization about the whole ordeal.
“The price of cumberland! That is a step
on which I must fall down, or else o'erleap,
For in my way it lies. Stars hide your fires;
Let not light see my black and deep desires:
The eye wink at the hand; yet let that be
Which the eye fears. When it is done to see”
on which I must fall down, or else o'erleap,
For in my way it lies. Stars hide your fires;
Let not light see my black and deep desires:
The eye wink at the hand; yet let that be
Which the eye fears. When it is done to see”
He must be able to kill more than King Duncan, he also needs to dispose of his two sons, one of which had just been named Prince of Cumberland, as well as anyone else who intends to stand in his way. As the story continues, you see his conflicted thoughts being to disappear and when he is faced with the fact that his best friend and his sons stand in the way of his throne, Macbeth has no thoughts of conflict and right away contacts murderers to get the job done, After that has transpired, Macbeth only has his sights set on keeping his throne and no longer being conflicted on what he must do to retain it.
The one part of Macbeth’s character that changes the most may possibly be his ability to be remorseful about what he has done. Just after the king is killed, by none other than Macbeth himself, he is greatly remorseful about what he had just done.
“I’ll go no more
I am afraid to think what I have done:
Look on’t again I dare not”
His remorse is very ephemeral though, as the story goes on from there his remorse begins to dissolve away,by the last act, he is no longer remorseful of anything. While he is waiting for Macduff and Malcolm to invade he hears screaming coming from somewhere inside the castle and responds with:
“I have almost forgot the taste of fears:
The time has been, my senses would have cooled
To hear a night-shriek, and my fell of hair
Would at a dismal treatise rouse and stir
As life were in’t. I have supped full with horrors.
Direness, familiar to my slaughterous thoughts.
Cannot once start me.”
Not only does he respond in such a way as to show no remorse, but he is soon told that it is Lady Macbeth and he does not go to console her, he just stays put and continues to worry about his impending doom. His lack of remorse really showed through when a servant came into his chambers to tell him that his wife had just died. “She should have died hereafter” This was the line that truly showed how much remorse he had lost through the stress that was his life.
Macbeth very well could have been the hero of the story if he had only decided not to succumb to the pressure and thoughts of power. Had he only thought one more time about how he was such a loyal subject to the king. Or how one more conflicted thought could have proved to himself that he should not follow through. If only those thoughts of remorse could have stopped him from repeating his actions. Maybe then he would not have ended such an empty man,and just possibly all of this could have been avoided if he had only been in another place at one second of time.
Hey Carolyn!
ReplyDeleteVery nice essay!
For the very beginning sentence, it was kind of choppy and can either be split into two sentences or you could also add the word "and" or something after the phrase "including the king".
"After he and Banquo" might flow a little better, just a rearrangement of words.
I do believe that there should be a comma after "stopped by the witches".
I really like your thesis. It captures the attention and lets the readers know exactly where you are going with your essay!
There is something about the sentence that stops me: "He would not even dare to be thinking.." . I think it is just the fusing of the two tenses that does not work.
"That is until the three witches come and change everything, once.." I think it might help to separate these into two different sentences after the word "everything". I think there should also be a comment after "That is".
I like your choice of quotes, just make sure you cite them with (act, scene and line).
For this sentence: "Still Lady Macbeth has a different idea, and claims…", I think it might help to separate into two sentences. "she claimed.." ect.
"He is not sure if he needs to force his becoming king" This sentence is slightly confusing, but I know what you mean. The "force is becoming king" is what I think is what is making it confusing.
"you see his conflicted thoughts being" In replace of "being", did you mean "beginning"? I would also spit that sentence up into two after "disappear".
"get the job done," Period, not a comma.
"His remorse is very ephemeral though," I do not think you need the word "though". In that same sentence, there should be a comma after "there". Also, "dissolve away,by " I would replace the comma with a period.
In the next sentence, there should be a comma after "invade".
I feel like that last quote deserves more of an explanation after it.
" but he is soon told that it is Lady Macbeth and he does not go to console her, he". I feel that you could replace the word "it" with something along the lines of "the person screaming" or something. Also, I would divide up this sentence into two after "console her".
The next sentence, I would personally change the word "really" with "also" or something like that.
In your conclusion, "Had he only thought one more time about how he was such a loyal subject to the king." this sentence is kind of confusing.
" if he had only been in another place at one second of time." This part is kind of confusing, but I like what you are trying to say.
This is a really great essay Carolyn! Do not feel obligated to change anything, but these are just some suggestions.