Everyone must peer edit two essays, and no paper can be edited by more than two people. This will ensure that all writers' essays are peer edited by two people. Think about the following:
Clear thesis statement at the end of a solid intro paragraph?
Does the intro, in fact, bring us to the thesis?
Is the essay well constructed?
Is it convincing or is more evidence needed anywhere?
Are the sentences clear?
Do any need rewriting?
Are you confused at any point? Might need to rewrite a sentence or build in more evidence.
Does the evidence support the point, or is there another quote you can recommend to replace the one used. Why does the quote used fall short?
Are there places where the word choice is weak? (WC)
Is the syntax confusing? (word order)
Anything else?
You are expected to make at least three strong recommendations for improvement.
10 pts.
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